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Diary of a False Love
« on: January 21 2006, 11:46 pm »
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Diary of a False Love

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A love can last forever? This is an example that sometimes love can lead to ruin. A multi-chapter story rewritten with a milder tone.

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Re: Diary of a False Love
« Reply #1 on: January 22 2006, 08:59 pm »
Updated Fanfiction.

Added Chapter 2 - Love? Love is a Joke...

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Re: Diary of a False Love
« Reply #2 on: January 23 2006, 12:23 pm »
Nice start, Robin. Look forward to the next chapter and what is exactly causing Syaoran to act so mean.

"Everything will surely be all right." 「絶対大丈夫だよ。」, "Zettai daijōbu da yo."
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Re: Diary of a False Love
« Reply #3 on: January 23 2006, 09:31 pm »
Ehe... thanks Arcademan! :D

Well, the tone is milder as you see. The orginal one is just insane.

Anyway, the later chapters will explain things why such sadness has happened.

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Re: Diary of a False Love
« Reply #4 on: January 23 2006, 10:41 pm »
More insane, eh? Maybe that's the one I need to read...

After all, in my story 'Arcademan: In the Cards...' I did KILL Sakura in it...can't get anymore insane than that :tongue:

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Re: Diary of a False Love
« Reply #5 on: January 23 2006, 11:01 pm »
Well, depends on the death. What I did is much worse. I literally "killed" Sakura's spirit in Chapters 6-7 and she ends up...

Well, wait for it.

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Re: Diary of a False Love
« Reply #6 on: January 23 2006, 11:04 pm »
Well, depends on the death. What I did is much worse. I literally "killed" Sakura's spirit in Chapters 6-7 and she ends up...

Well, wait for it.

Yep...killing the spirit would be worse. In Sakura's death in my story, it was her spirit that brought her back and eventually led her to victory over dark forces.

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Re: Diary of a False Love
« Reply #7 on: January 23 2006, 11:09 pm »
That's the reason why CCS fans hated me for months.  :hehe:

I'm testing them with that fanfic.

Anyway, I'm retyping Chapter 3 right now.

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Re: Diary of a False Love
« Reply #8 on: January 30 2006, 01:01 am »
Fanfiction updated, Added Chapter 3.

Post comments if you like. :)

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Re: Diary of a False Love
« Reply #9 on: October 27 2006, 11:14 am »
can u plz put in da rest. i love the story, its really well written and i just cant wait to find out wat happens.
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