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« on: October 05 2006, 02:16 pm »
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Cold

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KuroFai fic. Fai's tongue slips while with Kurogane. Will this end everything betwen them for good?

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Re: Cold
« Reply #1 on: October 06 2006, 12:32 am »
V_____V Awww, poor Kuro!

I liked it, interesting idea!
Cold be heart and hand and bone
Cold be travelers far from home
They do not see what lies ahead
When sun has failed and moon is dead


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Re: Cold
« Reply #2 on: October 06 2006, 07:27 am »
Thanks n_n I re-read it this morning and found some stuff I don't like, so I'm going to switch it around.

and um o_o is anyone else seeing weird symbols instead of quotations? Cause it's freaking me out.


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Re: Cold
« Reply #3 on: October 06 2006, 10:20 am »
Yeah, I've had that happen to me before too, I'm not quite sure why it does that. Maybe try using the single quoations (like this: ' ) instead of the double ones (like this: ")?
Cold be heart and hand and bone
Cold be travelers far from home
They do not see what lies ahead
When sun has failed and moon is dead


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Re: Cold
« Reply #4 on: October 06 2006, 11:46 am »
whats this about?
We're seeking our fleeting dreams in a world with no answers...

The shining blaze in my heart will convey my wish...

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Re: Cold
« Reply #5 on: October 06 2006, 11:50 am »
whats this about?

what do you mean lostkitty-san??
this is a fanfic made by Moro-dashi...
please read it before posting........

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Re: Cold
« Reply #6 on: October 06 2006, 11:57 am »
no...I mean whats the...ugh...nvm
u can post any story u like there?
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Re: Cold
« Reply #7 on: October 06 2006, 12:56 pm »
Chapter two is not up o_o;; Even though it doesnt look like many people are reading n_n Thank you to those who did! One more chapter to go.


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Re: Cold
« Reply #8 on: October 07 2006, 05:57 am »
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Ehehehe, I think you're a very good writer, Moro-dashi-san! Poor Kuro-chan...

You'll probably get more comments on the KuroxFai LJ com than here, since the focus isn't really placed on fanfiction here. For a while I even forgot we HAD a fanfiction system, lol.
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Cold be travelers far from home
They do not see what lies ahead
When sun has failed and moon is dead


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Re: Cold
« Reply #9 on: December 28 2006, 05:59 am »
ahhhh!!!! *runing in circles* i want to know what happens next!!!!