Chapter 1: The hooded cloak
(by Ashlee, added on 2006-04-29 00:39:30 AEST) [Discussion Topic]
Ok, here is a run down on what is going on. The gang is heading to a new world, to collect Sakura feathers. And they ending up in this new world that looks familiar to Syaoran and Sakura. But is this place what they think it is. But also, they are not the only ones there.
The darkness over filled the room. Blood, water, and bodies cover the floor. One-man stand in the middle of the room, while another one walk in. The man in the middle turned around and was about to attack when the other men hold up his hand and froze the other men. He walked out of the shadow to the young man.
"You have done well. Now it's time. The next world is where we shall rule, and take what is mine." Said Fei Wong Reed "Also, you can get what is yours, Syaoran." The man is the middle who is now unfrozen, walk up to Fei Wong Reed. His brown hair blew in the wind. One of eyes covered by long cloth, and his clothing damp by blood, and cuts.
"Syaoran…."he said in a deep voice "For a long time I've await for this... now it's my turn…"
A bright light shined though the sand hills. Four people fell from the blinding light and landed on a sand hill.
"I think I broke my back..." said Kurogane. Trying to stand up.
"Well that was fun right Kuro-tan," said Fai
"I told you-"
"Where are we?" said Sakura looking around. "Wait, where is Syaoran!"
A bit father away from the group Syaoran awake to find that there is no one with him.
"Where did every one go?" he asks himself. He stood up and looks around, and saw a small village a bit further down the sand. He keep looking at the small town, because it remind him of something he saw before. Then he looks a bit further to the left and saw what he couldn't believe. The Clow ruins. He was home.
"Syaoran!" a scream filled the air. He looks behind, and saw that the princess, and the other all made it safety. "Are you hurt? Are you ok? What happen?" Syaoran just smile.
"We are home" he said, and pointed to the village.
As the group walk down the village road. Some thing was off. No one was outside. The shops were closed, no kids playing by the chicken cage, which is now empty.
"Princess, I think we should bring you home now. The King will love you see you" said Syaoran
"That is ok, I can go by myself. I have done it before," said Sakura. And she started running towards the castle.
"So where are we going?" ask Kurogane
"We have to follow the princess," said Syaoran "Last time we were here-"
"AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH" A loud scream full the air.
"What was that?" ask Fai
"Its the Princess" replied Mokona
The boys ran towards the scream. A couple of houses down the road, they saw Sakura.
"Princess what is wrong" ask Syaoran. Then when he got to her side he saw it. Dead, bloody, and lifeless bodies every where.
"There was a fight here." Said Fai. He went up to some of the bodies and look at their cuts, and weapons. "One Person did all this. The attacks are the same on each person. Also the weapon use is the same."
Kurogane cover Sakura-chan eyes so she won't have see it anymore. "We have to get out of here what ever happen here, it will be back."
"Syaoran-kun is that you!!" said a voice behind them. Syaoran look back and saw a person looking though the barely open door.
"Yes, I'm Syaoran. The Princes is here too." The door open, and out came some of the villagers.
"You guys have to come inside. There is some one out here killing every one. I will explain more. Hurry and come in"
The group walks into the village house. When they walk in, they saw about 15 other villagers. More then half of them weren't moving. Kurogane lay Sakura down on one of the beds. "I hope she is alright" said Fai. Looking at Sakura. "When did this all happen?" Fai asked to the villagers.
"About the time when the Princess and Syaoran-kun left. Men with strange clothing appeared out of nowhere attacking us. They only came at night for some odd reason. Then, a couple of days ago, a young man with a dark cloak walked into the village one morning and started attacking us. We ran into our homes and he didn't follow us. Every time we tried to step outside of these homes, he comes."
"Where is the King?" ask Syaoran
"He tried to help us." said one of villagers in the corner. "But he got hurt really bad when you guys left that day. He hasn't been able to even get out of bed. The High Priest put a spell on the houses so that no one that is evil can come in."
"Hey so that mean that daddy isn't evil" Fai teases. Mokona jump on Kurogane head and starting singing "Daddy is good. Daddy is good"
"Shut Up" Kurogane try to grab Mokona but Mokona jump on Syaoran head.
"What is that thing" ask the villages
"I'm Mokona Modoki"
"Long story. Any what is going on with the King and the High Priest. Are they safe?" ask Syaoran.
"None of us can get into the castle. Their is a strong barrier, two of them. One is from the high priest set one up to protect the King, while the other one is to make sure that they don't leave, and no one goes in."
"Well, it looks like we are going have to save them.," said Kurogane
"Will you do that?" ask Syaoran
"Yep. We will check around the castle and see if they're any weak points. By we I mean Kuro-puppy"
"WHAT!!! OH NO. Not this again. You are coming! Last time I almost got killed" yelled Kurogane
"Mokona is coming to!" Fai, Kurogane, and Mokona walk out of the house.
"Syaoran-kun. What happen in the ruins anyway?" ask villager
"Well..."
"Daddy is good, Daddy is good, Daddy is good" sang Mokona
"Could you tell that thing to shut up." yelled Kurogane
"Mokona you are going to have to be quite. We don't want to be herd" whispered Fai
"Its too late, look" said Kurogane
Down the road stood a young man. Wrap up in black-blooded cloak. His face was cover, and he was holding a long sword, with a symbol on it.
"Who are you?" Yelled Kurogane. The young man said nothing. "I said you are you?!"
"Where is Syaoran and the Princess" said the young man.
"He knows that they are here." said Fai. "Who is this guy?"
Then the young man charged forward towards them.
"Let me take care of this!" said Kurogane. "Mokona give me my sword" Mokona open his mouth and out came Kurogane sword. Kurogane grab it, and ran towards the young man. Kurogane grab his sword and try to cut his head off, but he miss. Instead he got the guy cloak. The hood fell from the guy head. A young man, with brown hair, and a bandaged up face cover up his right eye stood there."
"Syaoran. Where is he?" said the Dark SyaoranChapter 1: The hooded cloak
(by Ashlee, added on 2006-04-29 00:40:53 AEST) [Discussion Topic]
Ok, here is a run down on what is going on. The gang is heading to a new world, to collect Sakura feathers. And they ending up in this new world that looks familiar to Syaoran and Sakura. But is this place what they think it is. But also, they are not the only ones there.
The darkness over filled the room. Blood, water, and bodies cover the floor. One-man stand in the middle of the room, while another one walk in. The man in the middle turned around and was about to attack when the other men hold up his hand and froze the other men. He walked out of the shadow to the young man.
"You have done well. Now it's time. The next world is where we shall rule, and take what is mine." Said Fei Wong Reed "Also, you can get what is yours, Syaoran." The man is the middle who is now unfrozen, walk up to Fei Wong Reed. His brown hair blew in the wind. One of eyes covered by long cloth, and his clothing damp by blood, and cuts.
"Syaoran…."he said in a deep voice "For a long time I've await for this... now it's my turn…"
A bright light shined though the sand hills. Four people fell from the blinding light and landed on a sand hill.
"I think I broke my back..." said Kurogane. Trying to stand up.
"Well that was fun right Kuro-tan," said Fai
"I told you-"
"Where are we?" said Sakura looking around. "Wait, where is Syaoran!"
A bit father away from the group Syaoran awake to find that there is no one with him.
"Where did every one go?" he asks himself. He stood up and looks around, and saw a small village a bit further down the sand. He keep looking at the small town, because it remind him of something he saw before. Then he looks a bit further to the left and saw what he couldn't believe. The Clow ruins. He was home.
"Syaoran!" a scream filled the air. He looks behind, and saw that the princess, and the other all made it safety. "Are you hurt? Are you ok? What happen?" Syaoran just smile.
"We are home" he said, and pointed to the village.
As the group walk down the village road. Some thing was off. No one was outside. The shops were closed, no kids playing by the chicken cage, which is now empty.
"Princess, I think we should bring you home now. The King will love you see you" said Syaoran
"That is ok, I can go by myself. I have done it before," said Sakura. And she started running towards the castle.
"So where are we going?" ask Kurogane
"We have to follow the princess," said Syaoran "Last time we were here-"
"AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH" A loud scream full the air.
"What was that?" ask Fai
"Its the Princess" replied Mokona
The boys ran towards the scream. A couple of houses down the road, they saw Sakura.
"Princess what is wrong" ask Syaoran. Then when he got to her side he saw it. Dead, bloody, and lifeless bodies every where.
"There was a fight here." Said Fai. He went up to some of the bodies and look at their cuts, and weapons. "One Person did all this. The attacks are the same on each person. Also the weapon use is the same."
Kurogane cover Sakura-chan eyes so she won't have see it anymore. "We have to get out of here what ever happen here, it will be back."
"Syaoran-kun is that you!!" said a voice behind them. Syaoran look back and saw a person looking though the barely open door.
"Yes, I'm Syaoran. The Princes is here too." The door open, and out came some of the villagers.
"You guys have to come inside. There is some one out here killing every one. I will explain more. Hurry and come in"
The group walks into the village house. When they walk in, they saw about 15 other villagers. More then half of them weren't moving. Kurogane lay Sakura down on one of the beds. "I hope she is alright" said Fai. Looking at Sakura. "When did this all happen?" Fai asked to the villagers.
"About the time when the Princess and Syaoran-kun left. Men with strange clothing appeared out of nowhere attacking us. They only came at night for some odd reason. Then, a couple of days ago, a young man with a dark cloak walked into the village one morning and started attacking us. We ran into our homes and he didn't follow us. Every time we tried to step outside of these homes, he comes."
"Where is the King?" ask Syaoran
"He tried to help us." said one of villagers in the corner. "But he got hurt really bad when you guys left that day. He hasn't been able to even get out of bed. The High Priest put a spell on the houses so that no one that is evil can come in."
"Hey so that mean that daddy isn't evil" Fai teases. Mokona jump on Kurogane head and starting singing "Daddy is good. Daddy is good"
"Shut Up" Kurogane try to grab Mokona but Mokona jump on Syaoran head.
"What is that thing" ask the villages
"I'm Mokona Modoki"
"Long story. Any what is going on with the King and the High Priest. Are they safe?" ask Syaoran.
"None of us can get into the castle. Their is a strong barrier, two of them. One is from the high priest set one up to protect the King, while the other one is to make sure that they don't leave, and no one goes in."
"Well, it looks like we are going have to save them.," said Kurogane
"Will you do that?" ask Syaoran
"Yep. We will check around the castle and see if they're any weak points. By we I mean Kuro-puppy"
"WHAT!!! OH NO. Not this again. You are coming! Last time I almost got killed" yelled Kurogane
"Mokona is coming to!" Fai, Kurogane, and Mokona walk out of the house.
"Syaoran-kun. What happen in the ruins anyway?" ask villager
"Well..."
"Daddy is good, Daddy is good, Daddy is good" sang Mokona
"Could you tell that thing to shut up." yelled Kurogane
"Mokona you are going to have to be quite. We don't want to be herd" whispered Fai
"Its too late, look" said Kurogane
Down the road stood a young man. Wrap up in black-blooded cloak. His face was cover, and he was holding a long sword, with a symbol on it.
"Who are you?" Yelled Kurogane. The young man said nothing. "I said you are you?!"
"Where is Syaoran and the Princess" said the young man.
"He knows that they are here." said Fai. "Who is this guy?"
Then the young man charged forward towards them.
"Let me take care of this!" said Kurogane. "Mokona give me my sword" Mokona open his mouth and out came Kurogane sword. Kurogane grab it, and ran towards the young man. Kurogane grab his sword and try to cut his head off, but he miss. Instead he got the guy cloak. The hood fell from the guy head. A young man, with brown hair, and a bandaged up face cover up his right eye stood there."
"Syaoran. Where is he?" commanded the Dark Syaoran |
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