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Slipped Away
« on: August 24 2005, 10:41 am »
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Slipped Away

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Syaoran and Sakura are together and everyones happy...right? Nope. Theres one person who isn't...Eriol. He wants them apart. Can he do anything to make that happen? One shot,song fic. The song is from Avril Lavigne.

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Re: Slipped Away
« Reply #1 on: August 24 2005, 11:27 am »
So sad :(

- You mean person (j/k)

Very nicely written. No spelling mistakes that I noticed, however one grammer mistake, 'coma' near the end should be 'coffin' I think :D
Keep up the good work, hopefully we might see more from you :D
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Re: Slipped Away
« Reply #2 on: August 24 2005, 03:17 pm »
hehe I'm sorry...-_- and yeah...I KNEW something was wrong about that 'coma' thing!! But I could never figure out what that problem was...thank you for correcting me :sweatdrop: so...was it good? Because like...I made you sad...is that bad? Or good? Or what? :XD:

Anyway (:heh:) thank you :keke:

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Re: Slipped Away
« Reply #3 on: August 24 2005, 03:29 pm »
who knows, cause I don't  :tongue3:

and you are welcome :D
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Re: Slipped Away
« Reply #4 on: August 27 2005, 09:27 pm »
oh my god,he killed Syaoran,he's a *******.Anyhows,it's great,good job there
I need someone,I'm all alone,In the dark.No matter what you do you can't change that,ever.
I'm worthless,absoulutly worhtless.
You have no power over me,but you don't know me.
You think you know me,but that's one mistake.
I'm always wathching you...

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Re: Slipped Away
« Reply #5 on: September 02 2005, 09:58 am »
awwwww a very good written story but i actually prefer the ones where sakura and syaoran at the end stand together. so sad story it almost made me cry ohhhh great imagination though!!! jejejejeje
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Re: Slipped Away
« Reply #6 on: September 02 2005, 10:37 am »
hehe...thank you :keke:

oh my god,he killed Syaoran,he's a *******
see? hes so ooc, ne?

oh, and me so sorry to all those Eriol-kun- fans!! -_-