Chapter 1: A game (by lostkitty, added on 2006-11-22 23:14:48 AEST) [Discussion Topic]
This is my first fan fiction ! ^ ^ Please give me your comments and some tips !
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They arrived at a new world , five travelers : a teenage boy with amber colored eyes and brown hair , a teenage girl with emerald green eyes and sandy colored hair , two older looking men one with blonde hair and blue eyes while the other was a black haired and with stunning red eyes . There were bright lights everywhere and lots of stall like places with lots of games . The place was similar to a festival ground / bazaar .
Syaoran : :We've arrived at a new country ! Mokona , can you feel Sakura-hime no hane ?
Mokona : puu...no , I can't feel the presence of Sakura's feather . But...I can feel a strong power...
Sakura : I wonder what kind of country is this ?
Fai / Kurogane : This is not the country I came from...
~ Kurogane glares at Fai while Fai just smiles back at him . Apparently their contrasts are not only on their clothing ang looks but also their mood ~
Suddenly , a group of girls aproach them...
" Ara...it seems like you are lost ! " says a familiar voice . It was Karen-san they met in the past worlds.
" Would you like to try Suzuran group's game ? " asks Karen . " Our games are not only fun but also special. "
Syaoran : eh...er...we're......
Mokona : Yes !
* Syaoran , Sakura , Fai and Kurogane : O_O *
They were greeted by Suzuran in front of the stall .
Suzuran : Would you like to try our game ? It's called the 'Whose the real person game' , if you guess correctly you'll get prizes !!!
Fai : We would like to ... but we don't have money $$$
Suzuran : It's ok...we don't charge beginers
Thus , let the games begin !!!
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I'm getting the writers cramp...I'll write more ater ^_^
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